Since the actual post is long enough, figured I’d put this in another entry.
On the whole, I’m pleased with the monster prompt. Major issue is that there’s not enough hints from the beginning that Jeremy didn’t like his dog much, but for something that’s hardly edited (I added an “a” and changed a “for” to “of” and checked for misspellings) I think it turned out well.
But honestly I’m not likely to post my abject failures. Maybe the self-critique thing is unnecessary.